Rachel turned to look over her shoulder. The man who crossed the room was gorgeous. Her heart skipped a beat when he smiled at her, but then she’d seen him have that effect on a lot of women.
“Why don’t you guys go ahead and get out of here. I can finish up.” Although they’d all been surprised by Lou’s offer, none of them had argued with him. It was late, they’d been on their feet for hours, and they were exhausted.
No one hesitated; they grabbed their belongings and made a beeline for the door. Rachel was the last in line and, as she headed out, Lou stopped her.
She should never have looked back over her shoulder that night and, if she had the chance to do it again, she would without a doubt keep walking.
But on that night, in that time, she did look back.
“Would you mind staying for a few minutes?”
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